TEARING ME APART

IT'S A MYSTERY
TO SEE HOW WE ARE
WHERE WE CAME FROM
AND STARTED OUT
AS TWO TOGETHER
AND TWO WHICH WERE
SUPPOSE TO BE FOREVER
BUT I SIT AND REMINISCE
ON MEMORIES FILLED WITH YOU AND ME
I WONDER IF ITS FADING
MY HEART KEEPS COMPLAINING
OF THE PAIN AND ANGER
IT FEELS DEEP WITHIN
BUT I WONDER
IS THIS MY PAIN
TO GO ALONE
I SIT IN DARKNESS
AS IT OVERSHADOWS ME
I CAN SEE NOTHING
BUT ONLY FEEL HANDS
OF HATRED
TEARING ME
TEARING ME APART


(Edited by Web_Master)This is a lovely poem to the utmost of my gratitude this poem is well constructed from the heart ,you'll be seeing this poem on many web pages.[web_Master Twilight]

Wow she gut a Web-master comment well done but seriously what inspire you to write like this,who are what is you inspiration?

wow last time i saw a web master comment,was January loli dnt know what to say jus...............well done girl

Thank you Web Master Twilight i am so honoured
Also thank you Gothica and Jr

Jr each poem that i write, i write them in the type of mood i am in. So they will always be deep and symbolic because it is real,its not just imagination and rhythm.

ye dats me most the times too but sumtimes i jus pick up pen n paper n start writing n strngale i dont know wat am writing until am done lol..... i think dats wierd