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Dark-Skin-Better
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PostSubject: SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE   SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE EmptyWed Feb 27, 2008 1:06 pm

We have nothing in common yet we are in love,
Maybe it's your angelic attributes like heaven above.
We stand at different sides of a thin line,
Still our love leaks through and combine.
Sometimes i wish we had more in common,
Like background,social life and your last name Hampton.
But to meet an angel is only a priveledge,
Baby we got love and somethings got to give.


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PostSubject: Re: SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE   SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE EmptyWed Feb 27, 2008 10:05 pm

well now you are showing true writing qualities but its lacking sumthing ive not yet discovered
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PostSubject: Re: SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE   SOMETHINGS GOT TO GIVE EmptyThu Feb 28, 2008 8:11 pm

its jus poetry but mayb you can let me know wat its lacking n i can touch it up mek it better Laughing
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