Shorty Claudy
Victor
Posts : 70
Join date : 2008-11-20
 |  Subject: Oneday Sun Nov 30, 2008 1:35 pm | |
| One day,
your arms will possess me,
One day,
you will ask for my hand,
One day,
the ring will be shining,
In the sun as we walk
hand in hand
on the beach smiling. | |
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DANNY
Dreamer
Posts : 29
Join date : 2008-02-14
| | Subject: Re: Oneday Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:06 pm | |
| if this is a ballad ilove it girllllllllllllllllll  well done like what jr would say but it needs more lines to be a true ballad but i love the formation | |
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Shorty Claudy
Victor
Posts : 70
Join date : 2008-11-20
| | Subject: Re: Oneday Sun Dec 07, 2008 9:51 pm | |
|  thanks Danny | |
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