Dark-Skin-Better
Protege
Posts : 298
Join date : 2008-01-15
Age : 39
Location : antigua
 |  Subject: LOOK CLOSER Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:47 am | |
| Look at me what do you see ,
Is it that young girl i used to be?
Or do you see a woman strong and tall ,
With not a care in the world and no worries at all ?
Do you see fear in my eyes or smell fear on my skin,
Or just assume that i'm brave not knowing where i've been ?
The brightness in my eyes has faded away,
And now i thank God for just one more day.
My dreams have been locked away,i have nothin else to say.
Because as you look closer you'll see i'm blue,
But come any closer........
And you'll see you | |
|
DANNY
Dreamer
Posts : 29
Join date : 2008-02-14
| | Subject: Re: LOOK CLOSER Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:42 pm | |
| well the aspect was well r brought across lovely in this poem,it show the inspiration to one self is on a great demand | |
|
